Bertinho_Gamer

"a few minor inconsistencies" people truly dont know how to read nowadays...

a promissing story that was ruined by author's incompetence. shallow characters, no descriptions of their appearances at all. think of the dumbest reason something in the story is happening, and that's the motive

distorced MHA. heavily altered to cover plotholes author himself created. okaish grammar. horrible character development and understanding. trash basically

this story is absolutely trashy, grammar wise, plot wise, lenght wise. only some 'unknown' privileges could lead this novel to its current height

it is okay. not good, but also not utterly bad. the chapters could be better editted, as they seem like a bunch of words glued together since the author does not use paragraphs constantly. childish mc. unrealistic progression. dumb decisions. this had potential, unfortunately, though, author does not know how to create a good original character, who supposedly has an inteliggence 20 times higher than an ordinary person, and still is completely and astonighingly dumb

really bad. this had potential, but unfortunately author messed everything up writing like a kid with barely recognizable english and rushing important parts of the story along a stupid arrogant nonsensical mc

cringe as fuck. the story makes no sense. a lot of contradictions

amazing job author

the tanslation is nice but the story is........bad.......just bad.....really....thats it

a second review because i believe this fic deserves 5 star because of its potential