Ash987

This is a captivating story of cultivation rebirth and revenge. I wished there was romance as well but it's still good without it. The struggle between FL and villains is entertaining. The story is unfinished though, which was a bit disappointing. I also hoped there were some more insights on certain characters and subjects mentioned. Apart from the annoying name confusion and the mistake in personal pronouns here and there; the translation is good. Hopefully these mistakes get fixed and the story is completed.

Divine tree was close to Mo Chuan and was really shocked when she killed Mo Chuan, She didn't show any gratitude to Mo Chuan. At this moment she had turned dark and didn't take Momo's help into account for saving her.

l know right, he saved her for nothing.As far as what has been mentioned, Mo Chuan didn't do much to her in previous life, just acquired the broken sword which would be due to the Lin guy and had saved her once and never to appear again. His debt should be paid off when he saved her together with Fusang tree .She shouldn't have taken the token by force. Maybe he is alive.... fingers crossed.