Diony_Deleon
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Diony_Deleon10 days ago発表Story is so good system isn’t to broken and is good and simple and the characters are well portrayed like in canon so 10/10 good read
- Diony_Deleon18 days agoコメント
Isn’t he supposed to be sasuke twin why is he older also to much scene skipping and no details
- Diony_Deleon2 months agoに返信 Zayji_Vinsmoke
Also he could have setup woodclones around the area knowing they were going to attack
- Diony_Deleon2 months agoコメント
I need more
- Diony_Deleon3 months agoコメント
I hope he’s acting cause ain’t no way he didn’t see that coming
- Diony_Deleon3 months ago発表
This story is super good only thing is grammar sometimes tweaks out like using her instead of him but the plot is great and dives in into the Naruto politics making it even better wish his cheat got explained better but that’s fine but overall so good
- Diony_Deleon10 months ago発表
Keep going this story is really good only problem I have is with the power scaling but I pretend I didn’t read that but other than that keep going
- Diony_Deleon10 months agoコメント
When is next chapter I can’t wait
