Full_time_Madman
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Full_time_Madman23hコメント.
"Good morning, my love," he whispered, pressing a gentle kiss to her forehead.- Full_time_Madman23hコメント
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"Ensure that everyone in the castle maintains absolute silence until tomorrow morning. I will not tolerate even the slightest disruption," the lord commanded with authority. - Full_time_Madman23hコメント
Death and... me (Just like that novel or what?)
"My lord, my lord, congratulations!" the head maid exclaimed, bursting out of the room with a radiant smile. "My lady has given birth to twins!" - Full_time_Madman23hコメント
Looks like reborn in process
"Bring the hot water!" the head maid barked out orders, her voice echoing through the corridors of the castle. "And fetch some extra clothes, hurry!" - Full_time_Madman23hコメント
SIS, really?
With a heavy sigh, she brought her hands to her face, her breaths deep and contemplative. But soon, a warm flush spread across her cheeks, and a radiant smile graced her lips. "He said he wants to marry me," she exclaimed, her heart dancing with newfound joy. "For the first time, someone has expressed a desire for me." - Full_time_Madman23hコメント
Ok, Not expected
A gleeful laughter bubbled forth from her lips as she reveled in the prospect of a future filled with love and companionship. "He is mine, and mine alone," she declared with unwavering determination. "Whatever the future holds, he belongs to me." - Full_time_Madman23hコメント
That's first time
"When you cross this portal, you will be reborn in a new world," the Goddess explained, her voice carrying a solemn weight. - Full_time_Madman23hコメント
Ok, that made me assured
The prohibition against any other women in his life stirred conflicting emotions within him. He understood the importance of loyalty to the Goddess, yet the prospect of eternal solitude weighed heavily on his heart. - Full_time_Madman23hコメント
When you are thinking, use( ') this symbol
"If only I were in a body, not in a soul form," he thought ruefully, his mind lingering on the tantalizing memory of the Goddess's touch. A wistful sigh escaped his lips as he contemplated the journey that lay ahead, knowing that he would stop at nothing to fulfill the terms of the contract and win the heart of the one he desired. - Full_time_Madman23h発表
I will be honest with you, I have read like 4 chapters and, the things that I don't like are there in the comments section of each chapter and, I am not going to write an elaborate review because, I don't have much time though so, I will get straight down to bussiness, I was attracted by the tittle, I read the chapters and, found it good not extraordinary though and, The thing that I like are the wishes and, might be his Attitude and, there were somethings such as Lack of reaction and, understanding of the situation and, He need feel more like human, It kept me hooked though and, I would be honest with you, I found it good and, will be reading more upcoming future but one thing, I hope author write more lengthy chapter, I meant from the bottom of the heart. That's all. Enjoy, have a good day-opps, I mean, have a good night. Anything you can believe. Though, for any romance reader up there give it a try and, try to stick on for like 10 to 15 chapter, I think author should have improved there.
- Full_time_Madman23hに返信 Death_Monarch_1
that's most unbelievable part I have heard, are you serious? I heard that author usually discord Id and, here I am.
Upon hearing her assurance that she would grant any wish he desired, he couldn't contain his excitement. "Will you fulfill any wish I ask for?" he inquired eagerly. - Full_time_Madman23hに返信 Death_Monarch_1
But, bro, he is dying, literally, imagine, you are about to die, and, some random grim reaper appears in front of you and says, "Hey, don't be afraid of me." and, then, how will you feel? will you able keep you head calm and, say yes, yes, I shouldn't be afraid after all it's just a grim reaper
"Don't be afraid," came a soft, melodious voice, gently soothing his troubled soul. - Full_time_Madman1dコメント
Again, you spoil my mood with another short chepter
With the collars in place, the Goddess instructed him to read the terms outlined in the contract. With a sense of determination, he focused his gaze on the contract, his eyes scanning the words with fervent resolve, ready to embark on this journey to win the heart of a goddess. - Full_time_Madman1dコメント
If it was I then, I would have asked for something else considering she doesn't like me from the way she is behaving
"I have already made my wishes known. The only thing I desire now is to marry you, Goddess," he stated without hesitation, his heart laid bare before her. - Full_time_Madman1dコメント
Why angry? you only said that he could literally ask anything or wish anything
The Goddess's anger began to wane, the oppressive pressure dissipating as she took a deep breath to steady herself. - Full_time_Madman1dコメント
Why ask forgiveness? but yeah, still okay though
"Goddess, forgive me for my intrusion. I meant no disrespect to your pride. I only asked for what I desired, as you said I could," he offered, his words laced with humility and understanding. - Full_time_Madman1dコメント
Just like that KONOSUBA scene
A heavy silence descended upon them, and the Goddess's expression turned perplexed, unable to comprehend his audacious request. The atmosphere crackled with tension as the pressure around them seemed to intensify, the weight of the Goddess's disapproval palpable. - Full_time_Madman1dコメント
You know, what? I asked the (Mc) seriously? I mean, I know that it's is good request but for a moment, I thought he might ask I want to marry the most beautiful goddess in the universe? I mean why her?
"My third wish is to marry you, Goddess. I want you to be my wife," he declared boldly, his words hanging in the air with a weighty anticipation. - Full_time_Madman1dコメント
Another thing, I am very unhappy with the short chapter, this all 3 wishes could have written in 1 chapter, why stretch it and write 3? It gives bad indication readers that writer might also stretch the story like this in future.
With his second wish granted, he felt a surge of anticipation for his final request. With a smirk playing upon his lips, he readied himself to voice his third and ultimate desire, his heart brimming with excitement for the adventures that lay ahead.