Thank you on this! I didn't copy the whole chapter over from google docs apparently.

I mean it's kind of obvious that he's an impulsive mess. lol

Thank you for sharing your thoughts. What aspects do you believe could elevate its quality further? I value constructive criticism.

Shameless insert of my own review!~ Yes, this is a shameless insert of myself into a story. When you're the main character of life, sometimes you need to be the main character in a story as well.