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I use Auto speech and I just noticed that my last sentence doesn't really make sense while I was trying to say was that most he is like low to mid alpha mutant which is like a level four or something like that
When he said until you meet again I immediately thought of that skeleton guy from Masters of the universe
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AI Art: Shadow in the human realm by @Glitch | PixAI this is him but with purple eyes a happier expression and different cloths for cloths just imagine a cool suit of armor and thin black cloth underneath with nice leather shoes.
I will try to add more to world building and I know the chapters are short but that's why i will try to make daily updates I appreciate you bringing this to my attention I will try my best to resolve them if you read the latest chapter you will see that I have given some more detail to his character I plan to give an image of him soon and thank you for the five star review it means alot to me I hope you have a blessed day.
You should stop down playing other characters like magneto and stuff and you're also down playing level 5 mutants cuz little if I mutants could do stuff that like way more stuff than what he's shown
i like this story very much i believe that it is well written and that the character development and world building have very good especially in the latest chapters i do hope this author continues this story and for anyone that likes jjk of Percy Jackson i highly recommend this book
It said speed surge it's meant to say speedster
I also like how this fanfic is like it deals with speed force and like a speed surge and stuff cuz all the other the boys fanfics just have people reincarnating as homelander which gets pretty boring and I've always wanted one where there was either the flash or somebody like the flash in the boys