need mom scenes next

it’s pretty good but i feel like you splitting up a really long chapter and making them shorter

lie*

is this effects of him being in the body of a child cause wasn’t he like 15 in his last life?? loving somebody you just met is crazy won’t lis

don’t tell me you’re going the adoptive sister lover route

frl this kind of feel like i’ve been reading straight filler first 12 chapters of a novel i read where it feels like nothing i’ve been reading is containing the actual plot

dawg i remember you said in the description he was like us he is not like me he is a straight up idiot why would a test be held here😭😭

don’t you mean cm? i’m pretty sure no human unless it’s a monster walking around with something bigger than 17 inches😭😭

decent world building, has a above average power system it’s pretty decent won’t lie mc is kinda good the main problem is the fml she is very underwhelming author should’ve made it a harem or picked a better fml, fml is one of the worse i read in the while she is really bad i don’t be getting the hype behind i only think she so popular cause they gave people (like his cousin) less screen time to make her get more and she don’t even seem in love with him she just like his power very underwhelming with harems it’s easily to tolerate a bad fml but when it’s only one it’s easy to point how bad they are but yeah that’s my review author side characters are also decent fml still the worse though

it’s bad mc not a villain author nerf the mc by taking away his great talents that make the character body he in the great villain no good rewards or talents everybody overpowered while the mc is weak, he isn’t even an anti hero author wanted to make a different type of story but he failed this isn’t his first work that went to crap because he tries to be different but then always take a bad direction like why take away the mc main talents then he getting beat up by guys like xander he has rumors spread about him this story is just stupid i knew i should’ve dropped when the mc got his main talents taking away cause the author wanted to be different how can you be the villain without your main ablities this suppose to be a underdog trope but villains aren’t underdogs the real mc really strong though overpowered story is bad

shouldn’t it have been 2 years or like 1 year and 4-6 months cause he was 14

tftc

smart king this hero is clearly out of control he probably planning to overthrow the kingdom when this is all over

ok now this is overdoing it lol

praise the author i did not want a whole novel about revenge

the rewards are straight up garbage he killed 12 monsters just to get pants and a shirt the description is extremely misleading lust king and all that bullcrap don’t even see his quest are super dumb and the two girls his predecessor just happened to kidnapped had more power than him what a big cliche i seen that from a mile away especially by the way anna acted the op is just as misleading as the description author is also asking for 2 fast past and 20 coins for a brand new author this turned out to be completely underwhelming

aren’t these curses way to big just for the start of a story where he already has to start over with zero power? lol

yeah this is why i’m so tired of the little sister trope like what is this? at 13 and you can’t even sleep by yourself

pretty good won’t lie it just focused to much on the side characters that a lot of the times the mc doesn’t feel like the mc author said he didn’t want sc to get forgotten about that’s good and all but they should’ve be to revelevant to the point you go a multiples on them and don’t see the mc that’s a lot of what the 2nd arc suffered from he still has great moments though just try to fix this for the 3rd arc plz

mc is literally a slave they could literally control his movement i don't know why the author thought people would like that. it's in our human nature to want to be in control of all our own actions and he just forgets they tell him to stop and go like he's a pet it's very unbecoming of a story when your main character is a test subject/slave he got mad then became ok cause they offered sex, the female leads are obnoxious well that would be obvious when they treating you like a slave very underwhelming