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Amazing storyline, it's kinda cliche, but what story isn't? Tai is very understandable, and the characters are well defined. Looking forward to seeing how he rises to the top despite his weak Affinity.

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I won't be suprised if she does

For your first try, I'd say you did really great!😁😁 Reading this is just like watching a TV show, and honestly, that's what I think a slice of life should be like.

I've been wondering so too

sheesh, Visare, that's harsh!😂

My friend, GTHarris08, referred me to this book, and I must say that I'm really impressed.😁I just hope that the main character's name is not really fluffy sleepyhead, that's really funny 😂😂.

read the first chapter of yours before you talk

ok, I've read only the first four chapters, and I must say that I am impressed.most especially with your writing style.a reader can literally feel how Luka feels and can easily relate to him. also, I hope that he meets Von again somehow and teach him a nice lesson when he's stronger.keep up the good work!

Make frequent updates. the story is really good but you update too slowly.