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AOFD

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A simple person with complex thoughts… Discord: a_o_f_d

2023-12-24 入りましたGlobal
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21.4h

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64

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5

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  • AOFD
    AOFD2d
    発表

    I was planning on writing a review when I was done with the first volume, but things happened… and here it is! So "School Of The Elites" is a story centered around a group of "irregular" children, and naturally the first Arc, is based on them and their schooling, it's an introduction of the sort. But the later story arcs, although still connected to the school because it is a major element of the plot, are not just about them schooling, because that's boring and time consuming. I'm not completely sure if they would actually have a "class" apart from the crucial ones, but if there is ever a class scene it's focus must be on something else. Let me move from the boring stuff and the plot devices to the world building, I mentioned somewhere in the story that it is a fantasy themed story in a modern world, so their world is practically not normal, but unfortunately they don't fly in it, and are mostly good at using their heads… or not. And finally, which could possibly not be the final paragraph, my main character. I mentioned several times that "it is her world it just happens to revolve around many others", that's because almost every character introduced are related to the story or the other main characters. Or the characters might be a prelude to the other important characters. The main theme of the story is Memory loss, so of course they're connected, who knows they might have met themselves once in the past… or not. Once again I say, And finally, I have two main characters, two! The first one is Ean, Heaven Kinston whom we should all be familiar with, If you read the synopsis, prologue or the actual story and came here. While the second one is somewhat hidden, and plays a major role in the plot… or not. Just kidding, he actually does. One more thing, the character has not been introduced yet, but he should have been mentioned a few times. If you've read this far, how about reading the prologue then the novel itself. Then you can come back to this section, and hopefully leave a good review. Now, SOTE was the name of the book. But things happened, and… it's now Elites From Another World. I don't know how authors write their stories, but I just discovered something very important about mine, so I decided to change its outfit. New title, hopefully add a book cover, improved synopsis, and a more improved plot. So tell me, what exactly are you doing here? Aren't you going to start the novel?!

    altalt
    Elites From Another World
    ファンタジー · AOFD
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    発表

    When I read the first chapter I was hooked and I couldn't stop, it's a pity there are only 62 chapters because each and every chapter I read leaves me wanting for more. The writing style, the world building, the character development and the vivid description of the characters emotions makes this novel one of the best! I'm so glad I found it and chose to read it!

    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    コメント

    I knew someone would discover him! It was either Claire or Sam

    'Matt?'
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    に返信 DaoistFCWsMR

    The book doesn't have to be perfect bruh

    Finally, we reached the university. I saw Tanya walk under the arch that had almost become the place of Claire's and my first kiss. But it never happened. I walked away.
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    コメント

    That's how you get to people! You don't do anything when they actually expect you to, it makes them anxious and insecure and when they can't take it anymore they snap!😂

    Ch 30 Vantage Point
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    コメント

    Title drop

    For a second, I was in free fall, flying through the darkness. My mind screamed, because for it, free fall was danger.
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    コメント

    Friends…

    Ch 27 Chilled to the Bone
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    コメント

    Yup, maths is the best

    Back then I was still going to school. I was obsessed with mathematics. I guess it was my escape: the world was muddy, irrational and hard, but math wasn't. It existed outside human concepts of good and evil, outside the dissonance of living. It was pure logic and yet allowed for creativity. That was two years after my Protector -- back then it was a morose man in his fifties -- advised me against winning any math competitions, so I had to be careful not to be too noticeable in class. Most of my education was done in the solitude of the school library.
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    コメント

    Yes the novel is great. My favorite character is the mc, Matthew. Mickey is in his own way adorable, and uh what else? You're doing great and I like the novel very much!

    Ch 24 Tanya
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    コメント

    I'd say the mystery is mystifying😂 it just hurts to see that it's only 62 chapters

    Ch 16 Cost of Labor
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD1mth
    コメント

    The story has been great so far. It's very captivating and your writing style is quite unique. There is some mystery surrounding matt which I can't wait to discover… can't wait to read what's next(⁠ ⁠╹⁠▽⁠╹⁠ ⁠)

    Ch 7 Blue-Eyed Man
    altalt
    Free Fall (Pyramid of Gold)
    SF · Guiltythree
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  • AOFD
    AOFD2mth
    コメント

    I like the first chapter, it's very descriptive, it's quite long, but the story is interesting.

    Ch 1 1
    altalt
    MY CROCHETING LITTLE SISTER
    その他 · inc_stcl_b
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  • AOFD
    AOFD2mth
    コメント

    By the way, is this chapter 1?

    LUCIANO
    altalt
    Night of a full moon
    ファンタジー · Sara_Ani
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  • AOFD
    AOFD2mth
    コメント

    The story is good, although there are some typos, I believe you'll improve with time. As for the word count, the ideal number is 1500, but it's up to you though. So you do you, Good luck with your story!

    Ch 2 LUNAELLIAPE
    altalt
    Night of a full moon
    ファンタジー · Sara_Ani
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  • AOFD
    AOFD2mth
    コメント

    Hey Author, I think you need to edit these parts away

    この段落は削除されました。
    altalt
    Night of a full moon
    ファンタジー · Sara_Ani
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  • AOFD
    AOFD2mth
    に返信 NineHeavens

    Novels are life? Then read mine, it's a breath of fresh air…

    altalt
    Warlock of the Magus World
    ファンタジー · The Plagiarist
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