Asa_Trey

Also the author literally has a novel titled, " i will be lazy" so no suprises there . Give the novel what its owed, it's a review, not a comment. So please review what's there rather than what's not, i make it a point not to get personal unless the story is absolute shit. And no i have not read this yet.

seriously that's your only hangup, sure it's annoying i literally have an entire list of stuff i loved that the authors either dropped or just go on hiatus every few months. Not a reason to hate, I prefer this to hundreds of chapters of pure drivel, which is like 90% of the shit i find here.

coz it's dead

3 occupations and no explanation of what any of them are, just random snippets as if I'm supposed to know what six organs even mean in this situation

I'm confused so you have a fish at home that cooks for you and you're out here fishing for another fish

how big is this thing coz depending on the size, and how much fish is inside, I'm still wondering how you're carrying this shit home. You're technically weak and malnourished. If you said wooden bucket instead of barrel, that would be ok, coz bucket is literally just bucket, barrel is big barrel, but of course you don't bother with the actual details

you caught shrimp with a fishing line?

yea I'm done it was a bit more interesting in the manhwa, this is just shite

i get mortals doing that but it's a bloody spirit stone, I wanted simplicity not brain-dead, bro they have spirit energy, biting them doesn't test authenticity

an actual prodigal with a heart of gold, that's an actual personality for once, great start, and it's still simple straight to the point so far, no complicated backstories and whatnot