Charbel_Chaak

What I forgot to say is the actual constructive criticism: Appropriately update the summary and title to indicate this is a harem story.

Why the eff does this have a harem tag when the title and summary are both about a single woman? Is author simply trying to bait readers, letting them think its a wholesome romance and not another generic harem collector? Or are they simply writing this story with no proper planning or even a story in mind? Did they just have an idea of a system and began writing on the go, so they titled it according to the first chapters? Either way, I dislike this scummy behavior, for a lack of better word on my part. 1/5

The author likely won't finish the story because it'll fall apart at some point .i've read too many of those "im in the game now" and can recognize when one was written with no ending in mind, just collecting waifus. If it gets axed, and I somehow comes to know it, I will at best not care and at worst gloat. Go check something better with an actual plot that is centered around the world setting and the coming calamity and not the protagonist and collecting women. Ending Maker is a good example, it even has a good romance that compliments the story instead of making it be built around it. And its finished at that. Or read this if you want. Its your freedom after all.

This is slightly better than garbage. You think its a good story because it actually is. And then it unfolds its true colors. Another generic story with forced plots and a world setting all centered for the sole purpose of introducing new girls and attaching them to the protagonist. The protagonist who doesn't lose in a fight. Who has the drive to survive. And the protagonist who becomes a spineless pushover who can't say no to a girl because of forced plot reasons. His maid, his fiance, even the so called cold blooded princess who forces him to be her consort, ruining his life due to plot reasons and other things. Yet he does nothing. You think the plot is good but it all boils down in the end to the protagonist, who was a 5 star with his confidence and intelligence, walking into a bear cave (metaphorically) for one reason or another and once the bear is a woman, he becomes completely idiotic and turns into a 1 star. And not in the sense that he is flustered by women, but in the sense of the author forcing the story that way just to mame drama. The whole world setting, politics, demons, and all conflicts are in meaningless because they are all there just to collect more women to showcase them. Romance barely exists as the protagonist has the EQ of a stone and its so obvious how the author just turns him to an unaware idiot just to keep his forced "girl has feeling for him plot nb.29" from falling appart. Its infuriating to the least because I thought it was a good story with tense action and drama as the protagonist is established to have a forced weak state from the start and a death timer, forcing him to keep going forward... but then its all meaningless the moment you realize its all a hoax just to add and collect girls, not for the protagonist to have any romance for, but to just make it another generic harem garbage. A story written not for the sake of the story, its world and its characters, but for the sake of being another junk food platter. Its soggy fries at most. 3.5/10

Dogshit harem. Why tf is this harem? You intentionally left that out of the synopsis AND THE TITLE. The plot is just bland and bad on top of it. Go to hell with your horny harem shit. Cant find a single author who write with their heart and brain instead of their single dog pea sized penis