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Looks about right!
He's got a suit, of course! I've put some AI generated images of both the helmet and the general design for the armor on patreon. It's for paid member only, though. I think he gets his suit around 9 or 10 chapters ahead.
This picture would be perfect for the MC of my Original Novel. It fits the image in my head.
That's pretty much how I see Ben!
That's Marvel for you! And that's also why it's so hard to write a logical fic in that universe. It's because there's no real power level system and characters who have a certain power in one universe, can be much weaker in an other. Sometimes it even changes in the same universe. Anyway, if I didn't implement my own cultivation system in it, I think I'd have either given up on the fic or botched it up.
Physiology Perk for the win! Joke aside, I don't think I'll ever mention a precise measurement for it in my other novel. I'll allude to the fact that it's bigger than normal, but that's it. Simpler this way.
You'll quickly find out in the following chapters!
She's just explaining the general things to give them some perspectives and the rest they'll have to check on the computer.
Thanks for your advice, though.
It happens, don't worry!
It's the only way for me to advertise. I understand that it may not be the most pleasant thing, but then again you're reading this novel for free and if you're not interested in that 'block of text', you can skip it. And let's be honest here, even if there was nothing, I doubt you'd have donated anything to my patreon.
I put the tag cultivation on it.
Okay, what you said about the last names kept bothering me for the last few days. Since I like my novel to be void of 'plotholes' and incoherences, everything needs to at least makes sense. And the 'na' for the MC was clearly wrong. So, unlike what I told you previously, I changed the last names of the four of them to Mikhailov. In every chapter where it's mentioned. It may not be perfect, but that way I can use the Mikhail as the first ancestor of the family and not just Adeliya's father. Anyway, I hope it'll make more sense to you and to other Russian-speaking readers. Thanks again for the info!
Oh! Like Odinson, son of Odin kind of thing? Thanks for the info! I won't change it though since I'm too far in, but I'll try to pay attention next time.
France! And it's Demian Mikhailovna. I used a name generator, so it may not be entirely accurate for Russian speaking folks.