The novel is good and all but your world background on earth is not good, you only describe The Sokeye aristocrat, and not others and their power ranking system is not talked about, the kind of authority Paul has in the Miranda Continent, so put some effort in that area. I don't know what others think, but that what i think. Keep up the good work, the story is good and the description of the God, mirsig is the best, love it.

More please, dont stop uploading, i love God novels