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Mela74 months ago発表In chapter 2, you told us he was why of confronting Fei about his supposed emotions then you proceeded to tell us they were actually in a relationship...I got confused you painted a picture where they didn't know each other Minor grammar and tense tweaks Beautiful story you rock💜
- Mela74 months agoに返信 PhoenixMoh
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- Mela74 months agoに返信 Daoist6w6QhO
Thank you so much💜 Add to your library to get updated
- Mela74 months ago発表
You obviously did your research And I absolutely adore Greek Gods so I'm going to love this And Thanatos is totally bad ass Great job Btw Alex hates you 😏😏
- Mela74 months agoに返信 XeanRBX
😊😊we appreciate your feedback kindly add to your library to receive updates
- Mela74 months ago発表
Good start The beginning was very good I mean who doesn't love a war story Good writing The chapters are kind of on the long side but amazing work
- Mela74 months agoに返信 Ji_Zuigetsu
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