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Kang_Minrin6mthに返信 Gift_Maigidaare you using these names because of international reader them it's good otherwise change the name to Korean namesand please use an attractive covercover have influence too somehowbut remember you need to follow every of others advice just do as your heart says
この段落は削除されました。- Kang_Minrin6mthコメントCh 1 Chapter 1: Dreams come through
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If you are writing K because it's fiction it's okay but please edit the sentence structure
"Dad again with this topic I told you already my mind is made up. Moms legacy still leaves on even though she was murdered in the wars she still published the biggest secret that led to the victory for country K winning the war. I promise am not going to die out there the military is a brutal place to be in but i promise to come back stronger and most of all alive so cheer up"Kimal said as she hugged her dad and pecked him on the checks. - Kang_Minrin6mthコメント
at . please edit it all mistakes will be edited
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don't right 28 right after full stop
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I mean change said to replied
"Thank you" Kimla said. Finally you got this Kimsy she smiled to herself and left heading to the mall to buy the things she would be needing.. - Kang_Minrin6mthコメント
kimla replied and headed to
"Thank you" Kimla said. Finally you got this Kimsy she smiled to herself and left heading to the mall to buy the things she would be needing.. - Kang_Minrin6mthコメント
sister but you never introduced
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Alvin was 18.. .. .
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hahaha I like this
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don't add with with again and again rather use comma
この段落は削除されました。 - Kang_Minrin6mthコメント
please fix this sentence . You have the beauty to be a model but why did you choose military. something like that roughly
この段落は削除されました。 - Kang_Minrin6mthコメント
Fix it like she was 23 with these features . don't write kimla age it's kinda awkward in my point of view
この段落は削除されました。 - Kang_Minrin6mthに返信 Lifebegin
a true hallyu wave lover
In Hyuk "Dad! Dad! Mom!" - Kang_Minrin6mthに返信 Lifebegin
oh I didn't consider that . right I should right my lady
Court lady Myeong suk whispered, "Royal Highness, he's just a servant."