Luis_Luiz

This must have been the most sentences put together I've ever seen in my entire life! Seeing this all in such quick succession was so absolutely... pathetic! It was ridiculously pathetic! And absolutely accurate to the random motivational speeches, speeches, and charisma-free stuff you'd expect to see in a DC show! Congrats Author, your fanfic is being completely accurate to the personalities of the people in the canon, it's getting better and better! Just one piece of advice: Put a calendar showing the day the chapters are updated, I think this fanfic isn't more popular because of the sporadic updates.

Author, don't take this as an insult (or if it makes you a better writer). I'm losing interest in this story, and I can see many others are too! The writing is still good, good quality, but waiting a week for so little development is frustrating, we waited a week just for an office conversation!? 🤬 We've all been waiting for months, but all we got in these chapters were just a few very simple conversations between the characters.

My God, this is so ridiculous (Smallville Origina, not this story)!!!!!!!!!! Smallville was so absurd, Clark giving blood to Zod was ridiculous, even more so in this story, he knew the stupid thing he was doing and did it anyway!?!?!?!?!? This was completely plot driven, Clark had no problem with people dying (several times, he was the one who killed them, but the plot doesn't care about those deaths) as long as it wasn't necessary for the plot, but Zod was about to die and he decides out of nowhere that he needs to save him because "it's the right thing to do".

You know , after everything that was said and done , what really made me turn against the protagonist was this miserable bullying against this innocent child in chapter 112 ! Would he really have been violent if the boy didn't obey him ?

This is one of the worst things I've ever read ! The plot is completely absurd and meaningless ! The main character is hunted , his little brother is freely attacked , almost killed , he is practically being taken hostage by S.H.I.E.L.D. and he still seems to be the one in the wrong in the situation ? HOW RIDICULOUS . But it's very well-written and , as pathetically exaggerated as it may be , I really see this plot happening in comic books ( in fact , I'm sure similar things happen frequently in current comics ) .

Here comes the I Know and Hate Batbully ! In other fanfic crossovers , he would start barking orders and people who don't obey him are instantly classified as villains , inventing ridiculously forced arguments for his will to be seen as law ( literally ) ! I don't like Otto , but please make him put this idiot in his place .

This was neither absurd nor ridiculous, but rather pathetic! This story was great so far, but Toji having so much trouble defeating the Joker and Harley was just... Bad. And before anyone says that this happens sometimes in comics, let's make this clear, all readers hate it when this happens! Even the biggest absurdities in comics are not so forced!

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A crazy and volatile personality, but yes, still an incredible personality .

What exactly was the liberty you took with Maeve's story? Everything except the details looks as per the TV series