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Man, I really hope this fic isn’t dead. I‘Ve read so many Pokémon stories on FF.net that I ran out of the readable ones and had to switch to this app to find new ones to read. By “readable ones”, I mean ones that: (A) Are in English because I’m American and English is the only language I know (so don’t flame me by thinking I’m saying English is the only language allowed because I’m not saying that And (B) Don’t have a egregious amount of grammer or spelling mistakes. I can look past the occasional mistake because I understand that English isn’t every author’s first language but if it’s like every other sentence, it’s too distracting to me and I just stop reading. It’s probably not hyperbole to say I‘ve read something like over 100+ individual fics with most likely something along the lines of WELL over 10 million total words I’ve read at this point (combined from both platforms). All that is to say, this fic is one of the best ones I’ve read on either platform. Great characters, well thought out story line, very little grammer/spelling mistakes, etc. It’s now been 4 months since the last update and I believe the author is updating his other fics instead but I really hope they haven’t dropped this fic because it’s an awesome masterpiece so far! I really, REALLY hope you continue with it because this truely is an amazing work!

Well written with the rare very minor spelling/grammatical mistakes. World building is great with the author setting up a more believable and what I think would be a more realistic view of how wild pokemon would really behave off route. Good character development so far as well (note: I am only on Chapter 17 of 20 right as of writing this). I only rated the “Updating Stability” a 3/5 because I haven’t seen an update since I started reading this story…..although that’s most likely more due to the fact that my reading speed far exceeds an authors upload speed so take that with a grain of salt…my reading speed is fast enough that whenever I find a story that piques my interest, I can usually start and finish reading it within a few days at most so the authors usually dont have the time to make a new chapter before I’m finished reading what’s already been uploaded (which is why I normally wait for multiple chapters of my favorite stories to be uploaded before reading them all in one go). Everything else though is a 5/5, rating wise. Overall, great story with believable world and characters with distinct, unique personalities so far!

Brilliant story so far! Cant wait to see where the randomizer takes us next! (Also, great idea using literal IRL randomizers for the story!)