Koko_Palibino

The book has deep words that makes me wanna open my dictionary lol. By just reading it, it also helped me to learn words that aren't familiar to me. On the other hand, great job to the author who narrates the story very well. Keep on writing. The story is great. Added to my collection [img=gift]

Hmm... The author has a potential in developing the story. I love how he tells what is going on with a scene however it is very crucial to edit the story or read it twice before posting so you can see if there are grammatical errors. The author always forgets punctuations (") after the character's conversation. Still, I enjoy reading it so far. I hope the author will keep on updating the story. [img=update][img=recommend]

Forgot the (") to her speech.

I like how the author narrates the story but can lessen mentioning Aiden's name. You can introduce him once and you can use 'He' moving forward. I'm sure the reader knows from there who's the character in the current scene.

Whooaahhh cool

Owkeeeyyy Elsaaa

That was fast.

Okay dadde

Okay, I like the first update so far. Interesting system where people are awakening.