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About the story, I really liked it, it's well written, and I found myself reading it more than once. About points that could be changed or included later, I think it's interesting to include the relationship between the OC and his father, seriously. It's obvious that Aizen, maybe something like a flashback of Aizen and the OC's mother or Aizen with the baby OC, it would also be cool to have a brief look at Aizen's plans with the protagonist and, finally, I think that in the Thousand Year War arc, maybe even before, the Quincies trying to kidnap the OC, or using some emotional blackmail or something like that.

I'm so happy this story exists!!! I really like Overgeared and being able to see a fanfic of my favorite Light Novel is priceless.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]Ps: my new favorite story

I'm so happy the story is back, I can't wait for future chapters

It was really good, I liked the development. Honestly, I didn't find it too forced and I thought it was really cool that the author used another reason for the 3rd ninja war. For me, Danzo works as the real perpetrator of the war, if other people didn't like it, well the author has no obligation to cater to everyone's tastes and, lastly, this is a fanfic and it's normal for it to be different from the original. So, congratulations to the writer and if anyone didn't like it, well, there are several other stories on the platform that might be to your liking.

Muzan, get ready because yours is saved.

Honestly, I think it makes sense for Seiji to have a brand in this format, especially since he is a transmigrator and has lived in the 21st century, surrounded by technology. It would be funny to find out that in his past life he was a programmer.

Seiji-kun, an assassin from the upper levels.

Please keep posting chapters, the story is perfect

Seriously, I don't know if it's just me, but I find it interesting to see the scene of Maki trapped there, you know, just waiting for Luffy's whole adventure to begin, and since the trash elders and Imu believe it's an infallible trap, imagine their faces contorting when they know that the demon king could have left at any moment. Man, that's priceless!