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I’m too busy with school and work so when I have a lot of free time, I’ll probably come back.

You’ll understand later.

This is my first novel, even I wasn’t expecting it to be perfect when starting out.

I am down to negotiate. Just tell me what part of the chapter you were unsatisfied with.

I added that in there just to make drama.

bro read a little further, I explained why. And if you think about the reasoning does make a little sense.

Lol

Don’t worry, the concept would be the same but I will try to improve on the grammar.

no harem but romance.

Liam didn't hate the man because of his love for his son, he disdained him for his weakness, letting his life being pushed around by others.

Forshadowing?? 🤫

No, it would be shown in the next chap.

Ok but Bro how do I improve my grammer😭😭

Hi I am a new author, and I have been a inspired by this piece of art, I hope you don’t mind me taking some of the elements of your beautiful work. My grammar is really bad tho. I hope you let me know how to improve my grammer i you don’t mind.

Lol I don’t mind at all, and thanks for your opinion.

Thank you for the review, I will try my best to improve the writing quality.

I can add it but later in the story

It would probably be around between chapter 25-30