ServArcher

is this supposed to be su? the name sure is inconsistent in this fanfic...

lucky girl

It's a fun story that relies on whether you can tolerate MC's gamer antic which can be annoying for some and hilarious to other... I love the interaction between the crew and Mc, and how Mc infect them with his gamer mindset. also the relationship between Mc and March 7 the "love interest" is absurd as it is cute. So if you can handle the suspension of disbelief, you're on a ride full of shit for giggles...

Ely become everyone's target lol

"untainted by knowledge." Mobius low-key insulting Ely lol

it is an enjoyable read for me. i just wonder when will MC start explaining about his ability to erina, not everything but the world traveler part and what it is really means. i think it's necessary progress for the relationship and the novel just gloss it over.

"... just myself."

too much info dumping, too detailed descriptions, and the "pov" lacked individuality. i think the mc's personality bleed to other chara's "pov" making it seems more like an omniscient third person "pov" rather than individual.

I'd like to rate the story higher but the grammar is just annoyingly tiring to read. the author just kept confusing words like there/their/they're and you're/your, and it's really irritating. The only thing nagging me about the plot is the MC's personality and mentality which was kinda like the author trying to balance between edginess and lighthearted but what you got basically a half-assed character. overall it is flawed story but interesting enough for to follow nonetheless.

dont read if u dont want a rushed ending