Xana_Shadow

The story in itself is great but halfway through (like, chapter 120 or 130) the author completely changes the way he's writing and seems to have completely changed their direction of where the story is headed. I do recommend this story, but I personally am gonna stop reading because of personal preference. I was already skeptical because of some unnecessary changes to the Canon (and some ridiculous aspects about the MC), but the sudden shift is what made me stop. Great story and thank the author for writing it, it's just not for me.

Oh my god. Not this again. Another pile of unreasonable hate because of the Author's bias.

feels like this is borderline tyranny. she's basically telling him to do what he wants regardless of his citizens.

yes, you are. As I said, there is nothing stopping the women in One Piece from becoming strong. We actually haven't seen a woman that actually worked on being strong. Nami, for example, is a navigator and thief, she had no reason to train like Kuina did. we never actually saw a woman that tried and failed to become strong, and you're claiming that they would automatically do fail because of their physics.

He just said he wouldn't laugh at someone's dream...

this joke stopped being funny years ago.

feels completely forced. there's literally nothing stopping women in the world of One Piece from becoming strong. this honestly feels like you were trying to force the plot to stay I line.

that's a problem in this fan fic, then. Canon Hiruzen was confirmed to personally give Naruto an allowance. I know this is a fan fic and all, but it feels like this was avoided JUST to paint Hiruzen in a bad light.

it's actually more than enough until you reach New World.

because he kept you safe from the villagers, safe from Danzo and his ideals at using you as a weapon, had guards monitor you to keep you safe, and personally gave you an allowance every chance he gets?