1. Writing Quality - the writing skill is below average but I love the story, so it will be 5 star. 2. Stability of Updates - i don't know where will i see it, so i just pick 5 star. 3. Story Development - I'm just in Chapter 2, so I'm not sure about it, but it is good. 4. Character Design - I love Erzana. When I read it, I imagine Erzana as a baby. 5. World Background - it is fantasy, i think with some comedy?