THIS IS AGAIN ANOTHER BNHA WHERE THE MC GROWS SLOWLY THROUGHOUT THE PACE OF THE STORY.I THINK THE AUTHOR DOES NOT UNDERSTAND WHAT FANFICS REALLY ARE WHEN HE WROTE THIS ANOTHER BNHA. IF I WANTED A MC WHO WOULD GROW EVEN MORE SLOWLY THAN THE ORIGINAL BNHA MC I WOULD READ BNHA ITSELF. THE MC GROWS SO SLOWLY IN THE THIS FANFIC THAT AT ANY GIVEN MOMENT OF TIME IF THE ORIGINAL MC HAD A FIGHT WITH THIS FANFIC MC, THE OG MC WOULD ANNIHILATE THIS FANFIC MC WITH JUST A FINGER FLICK.

Aww...I guess author has gone through a pretty bad breakup which has possibly clouded his judgment into thinking all girls are leeches...which is reflecting in his story.

I think there must be a dislike buttons for comments like these.You clearly havent read the later chapters where he uses other abilities like red,purple.

The graduation test for hatake satoru was put forward by his FATHER AND NOT HIM. At least read the chapters correctly and dont just skim them.

You really are shameless, aren't you. I mean like Oh my god, i have read translated MTL novels that have better English than your novel and to think you even shamelessly ask for gifts,there is a limit dude to stoop so low and forgo your dignity and ask for gifts for this idiotic novel. Learn how to write in proper grammatical english and then think about writing a novel.People like you get carried away by all that motivational bullshit that is going in this world and think i can be anything in this world or i can do anything in this worls and write this piece of crap.Look Author if you dont have the gift of writing then dont write and save our and your time.Thank You.

You really are shameless, aren't you. I mean like Oh my god, i have read translated MTL novels that have better English than your novel and to think you even shamelessly ask for gifts,there is a limit dude to stoop so low and forgo your dignity and ask for gifts for this idiotic novel. Learn how to write in proper grammatical english and then think about writing a novel.People like you get carried away by all that motivational bullshit that is going in this world and think i can be anything in this world or i can do anything in this worls and write this piece of crap.Look Author if you dont have the gift of writing then dont write and save our and your time.Thank You.

Go read the reply I have given to your LeaderBoba.I don't think you are worth even replying.

Oh..Who might this be,author from a different account or again a paid review.I give zero f**ks if you think I am worse just because I rated this novel 1-star.If I was given a chance in would do it again you why bcoz I put my hard earned money to buy coins and read novels and I need my money's worth.Of course you might be a useless yougmaster of some wealthy family who has money to spare and a dead brain who thinks these types of novels are great or you just might be someone with a childish mind and ego who cannot take others criticism in positive light and always has have the last word.So in conclusion yes I gave the novel 1 -star for it is worth that so BITE ME!

can you please recommend some ...bcoz i havent been able to find them

The people who have given 3 to 4 stars to this idiotic novel must have their brain damaged or are paid reviews. This is clearly an MTL and the author or the translator havent even edited the chapters.so many mistakes like stepmothe becomes wife in one chapter and birth mother in next chapter.Names keep on changing and dont even get me started on the grammar.Just wirting this bad review is already doing a favour for this novel.

I don't even know how it got so many power stones and golden tickets.

This book is so trash that even among the trashes it comes at the bottom.Names keep changing every now and then and new people's names keep introduced without even telling who they are.This is a new level trashiness and to think webnovel allowed this,really the standards of webnovel kepp dropping further and further.And don't even get me started on the story or character of MC.He does so many brainless things that I believe even a new born baby's decision-making and intelligence would be better than the MC.This book has made me so frustrated that I would like the author to take a printout of your book and choke on it.

He recognised Mt. Tai

This is a MTL DO NOT READ. THE NAMES OF CHARACTER, SECT, CULTIVATION TECHNIQUE KEEP CHANGING.AND THE TRANSLATOR OR THE AUTHOR HAD THE AUDACITY TO HAVE A PAID CHAPTER FROM CHAPTER 17.

Lin Fan is the literal definition of "What doesn't kill me,makes me stronger"

The MC in this story is an original(non-isekaied MC) so he has the same problems all teenagers of his age have stupidity, hotbloodedness, indecisive.See this is why i dont like these original MC's.Isekaied MC's are better because they would atleast have mental maturity to form good decisions.This what these idiot authors dont understand we are not here to read a normal MC acting like a normal tennager, we all see that in the real world daily and we are sick of it.We are here to read about a mature MC who makes mature decisions and a MC that is not possible in the real world beacause what you are writing is not reality story but a FANTASY FICTION(@author : read a dicitonary if you dont understand the meaning of those two words).

The story development is trash, character design very flawed,and the world background is not even introduced properly even after 200 chapters.The MC has an inheritance of Immortal cultivator but doesn't know many simple things in cultivation.In one chapter he advances like a monster but in the next he is beaten down to pulp like a dog.He doesn't use his inheritance properly,and keeps getting confused with the smallest of things like for example how to control pill fire or dark energy or chaotic body.How it it possible that the people of this world know all these things and there is nothing mentioned about these things in the immortals legacy.Truly pathetic.And the author doesn't know how to prepare opponents for the MC,he prepares a Level 100 opponent for Level 10 MC,and as usual he gets beaten down like a dog,and again the cliche plot of setting a date for battle in 1 year or 6 months.SAME CLICHE PLOT ROTATES THROUGH THE WHOLE NOVEL.AFTER WRITING THIS COPY PASTE STORY THE AUTHOR OR THE TRANSLATOR HAS THE AUDACITY TO START PAID CHAPTER FROM CHAPTER 16.If there was an option of giving 0 stars i would definitely give this story.

So he is okay with women going crazy in two or three days...?

DUDE IF YOU ARE TRANSLATING DO A PROPER JOB!

I don't even why the webnovel even allowed this book.. Trashiest of the trashiest trash...and the book starts a paid version from chapter 12. Much better authors on this platform give atleast 30-40 chapters