WorldScholar
A one eyed writer and system architect, with passion for running and studying. I invite you to embark on journeys that transcend reality and imagination.
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WorldScholar2dに返信 DaoistL06xOp- WorldScholar3dコメント
I think you meant "dashing"
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- WorldScholar6d発表
The idea for the story is great. The dialogues are great. The humor is great. There are many descriptions that are great. However, there is quite a bit of bloated writing. Many sentences are not needed and I would rather read the monologue of the MC and what the system says and skip reading all the rest. It that wasn't a problem, I would give it 5 stars.
- WorldScholar6dコメント"shit alien octopus! " Kai shouted, recoiling himself back.The grotesque creature skittered closer, a guttural snarl rising from its maw – a maw ringed with razor-sharp teeth.
- WorldScholar10dに返信 Giovanni_Ai
Because one dimentional characters are so amazing...
'You f*cking idiot!' He inwardly screamed. 'Since when do I have a d*ck for brains? Just when I thought that things couldn't get any worse, I turn out to be my own worst enemy' - WorldScholar16dに返信 BondageMaster
No. That would make the story boring and unneadingly inflated. It is the readers job to understand the story.
Once again, something clicked inside him. After the dark magic, he could clearly feel that simply by hearing the power word, a connection had been established between him and light magic. Derek could not stop grinning. - WorldScholar1mth発表
Shameless review from the Scholar here. At it’s core, this is a mystery. The Scholars and Warriors of the continent search for answers and continuously look to explore the Dark Forests to bring power and influence to their nations. Aiden might be the key to the answers they are looking for. Overpowered MC | Yes, but not world destroying. Harem | No
この本は削除されました。 - WorldScholar1mthに返信 IMTHEGIGACHAD
- WorldScholar2mthに返信 Joethedeath
That's how you slip into someone's house and rob him. Of course she doesn't want anything to do with that man.
"I have a girl who would very much like to spend some time with you, Sir," I continued, glancing at Emily, who wore an evil smile.