bakamondai

haha freedom eagle federation

what a poor series of chapters. MC randomly decides to murder a bunch of people for revenge when that's bever been something particularly intrinsic to his character, randomly keeps killing people for no reason and has to be forcefully subdued by the system. it's stupid when system become the arbitrator of a story. there's no reason he shouldn't be allowed to become a mass murderer if he wants to. I dunno it's just dumb. story's really dropped off since he left the villagers and just feels like he's running through nonsense .

the mental image of a snake fighting a giant spider creature with a sword held in its tail is so stupid. I love it.

of course MCs brother is the best most powerful child in the entire history of ever.

I'm convinced the MC had an alright ability at first, he was just too stupid to be able to use it.

I don't know why screaming internal dialouge is considered funny or for characters who are supposed to be comedic but I hope people will eventually stop doing it. it's a really dumb trope. moreover, it's really weird the author is making MC the most abused idiot who is also aware everyone hates him but also trying to do comedy with the character. I dunno. feels kinda icky.

This is pretty good. I love stories about having children. it's a giant harem and the girls are distinctive enough and get enough initial story time and distinction that I actually recognized their names. after they are added to the harem they kinds of lose some of their individuality and the children have basically no presence at this point. I'm not the biggest fan of adding modern weaponry into murium/martial arts but it's fine. I'm mostly skipped chapters about fighting war stuff to focus in on the ladies. some of the scenes with mc are a little too noncon for my taste but it's not awful and nothing is explicit.

This is actually pretty accurate for Chinese histories. women were advised to stop having sex after they became pregnant.

It's fine. the biggest issues I see are rapid character creation in under 5 lines. it also suffers from everyone is special but im the specialest. it's not enough for mc to reincarnate, dad is a transmigator, mom is a time traveler. it moves too quickly through things that simply don't matter. fine if nothing else is available but that's about it.

it's decent because the tropes are ones I like but author has a tendency to write annoying side characters. this is fine because they're mostly teenagers or children and both of those groups have a tendancy to be annoying. MC is an mc who wants to have the freedom to make his own choices. despite this being pretty important to him he inevitably tries to be a hero and involves himself in other people's shit for no reason. it doesn't help that the side characters he's doing shit for are irritating or annoying . also important to him is learning about the magic system which exists outside of just being a numerical system (yay). more time should be spent doing this because it's the best part of the novel.