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Luo_Yi_8155

Luo_Yi_8155

Lv3
2023-08-27 入りましたGlobal
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  • Luo_Yi_8155
    Luo_Yi_815513d
    に返信 Lucifer_TheOrignal

    I don't know why create good and support father you create Leon character for MC then betray his father for lust on her mother. What Kind Mindset For MC because him is upperhand all gods and hell almost all. Mr. Author my opinion is good for the start you write Mc Yandare characteristics but like other good to very evil Mc because you create main character is "impossible" all is people are like hays. sorry my grammar like sHl tt but thanks great novel your Mr. author please continue and create new novel great improvement you write ✍️.... :)

    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    ファンタジー · Victor_Weismann
    detail
  • Luo_Yi_8155
    Luo_Yi_815523d
    に返信 Victor_Weismann

    my first read this novel is good and addictive 1-700 chapters and now 700-1021 going worst and worst .... :( first Mc going very crazy and not unstoppable get married women or potential women in this novel really worst betrayal on his father and manipulate relationship Leon and Anna .. second mc very OP character not good this novel so fast not good character development. third mc is not loyal benefactor or friend help him all achievements this novel and worst in this coming future chapters we see VLAD favorite wife going get our Mc Victor like pro claim himself daughter like now. And last our MC became Animal Character development in this novel became not really acceptable for iread 1 to latest chapters i wish in this novel latest good and great change character development MC and Waves to Father Leon and friends and good Ending in your novel :) thanks for read my comment author

    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    ファンタジー · Victor_Weismann
    detail
  • Luo_Yi_8155
    Luo_Yi_815523d
    に返信 Victor_Weismann

    my first read this novel is good and addictive 1-700 chapters and now 700-1021 going worst and worst .... :( first Mc going very crazy and not unstoppable get married women or potential women in this novel really worst betrayal on his father and manipulate relationship Leon and Anna .. second mc very OP character not good this novel so fast not good character development. third mc is not loyal benefactor or friend help him all achievements this novel and worst in this coming future chapters we see VLAD favorite wife going get our Mc Victor like pro claim himself daughter like now. And last our MC became Animal Character development in this novel became not really acceptable for iread 1 to latest chapters i wish in this novel latest good and great change character development MC and Waves to Father Leon and friends and good Ending in your novel :) thanks for read my comment author

    My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
    ファンタジー · Victor_Weismann
    detail