Draden_Hebthal

+1

I get what you’re trying to do, but the wording is always the same as well as the reactions. Maybe if they were more spaced out and focused on different questions it would go better? It just doesn’t seem to be flowing properly and is a bit jarring. It’s Better with Vegito. Unfortunately for Chema they’re is too little history of the character and isn’t being conveyed other than she’s smart, yet warm. A multitasker and a cook. Not much is shown of her thought process or her actual work. What type of meals specifically is she redesigning, as well the devices she is inspired to make.

Don’t forget about a Saiyan’s appetite. He’d probably have to eat the entire world to not starve.

Is this story abandoned?

Is it over? It’s been really enjoyable so far.

I miss you! Please come back!

Everywhere one looked

The thing is that human blood strengthens the demonic power. So the more human you are the faster your demonic power grows. That’s the reason Nero is stated to be stronger by Dante in dmc4.( with that Dante was either talking about his current power when in dmc4 or when he was the same age.)

What about the blood on the tonto?

I’m so happy you’re continuing this story.