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AL_Grey

AL_Grey

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I'm a published author with eGlobal Creative Publishing. Check out stories under my pen name S. Kline as well. You can find me on Inkitt, Dreame, Radishfiction.com, and of course, Webnovel!

2023-08-03 入りましたGlobal
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  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    コメント

    I'm reading your story. I hope you didn't give up writing :)

  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    に返信 Xtrole

    Thank you SO much for reading this! I'm really appreciative of the support and feedback. It's great!

  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    に返信 Xtrole

    I know, right? I thought it was good for him to accept himself and his family. Maybe in the future, he can be cured though!

  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    に返信 Zenithnovels

    Hi - is this still something you're working on? Please let me know. I'd love to check it out. Thanks!

  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    に返信 Xtrole

    Thank you so much for reading this!! I'm sorry I didn't notice this before.

  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    コメント

    This is a plothole that has been corrected but the update hasn't gone through yet.

  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    発表

    I provided a shorter review a few days ago but this book deserves one that is more elaborate. I haven't gotten to the romance part yet but it deserves an early opinion so others will know how great it is. The word flow and imagery are beautiful and natural. The author clearly has a mastery of the English language. The visuals of the restaurant, each character, emotions, and intention of others are well detailed and fleshed out. I feel like I'm easily floating through the chapters while reading it. I am not confused at all since the author explains things so perfectly. I don't get hung up on situations or experiences and, while this author has excellent vocabulary the words are completely appropriate. They are not put out there for show and they do not bog the reader down. The characters are relatable, authentic, and people you root for in a story. Each chapter I read, I feel for Isabella, Violet, Daniel, and Adrian. I hope they do better, I'm cheering them on, and I want them to find happiness. I'm immersed in their world and with perfectly timed updates, I don't need to worry that I won't get that next chapter. Lets move onto my ultimate draw of this book - the food. There are so many vividly described delicious dishes in this book that I'm pretty sure I've gained fifteen pounds just reading it :) That is not an insult, just a testament to how adept the author is at illustrating each recipe. I can see, smell, and taste each dish in all its glory. If you are a chef, you will appreciate this book but no matter what you do in life, read this book. You won't be disappointed.

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  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    発表

    The vocabulary and flow of the story is wonderful. I'm enjoying each chapter as I read them. Very poetic and excellent imagery.

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  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    コメント

    This is amazing imagery. I love the food she's cooking.

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  • AL_Grey
    AL_Greya year ago
    コメント

    Great writing. Nice imagery and vocab.

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