unknown_00001

Frankly author since when Naruto is a children's series

the dialogues are rubbish, it's bland and it's without emotion, you just wrote the dialogues without describing the emotions behind them, like the shock and everything, if you know what I mean.

Really??

okay, you're right, plus if I have to be honest with you I didn't read even 5 chapters and I hated it because I knew how it was going to go and, I think it was was about a year and a half ago, I came across him again in the no-harem category which led me to see the reviews and respond to your comment

here is the Chinese site if you want to read there directly plus it's much better with an automatic translation of chrome than the work done by others (be careful I'm not denigrating the work of others eh) it's just my point of view in addition there are plenty of Douluo fanfiction that you will find with a mediocre translation from MTL. You can find other Dounghwa fanfic (dsl I forget how it is spelled) if you are interested. anyway here is the link : https://m.xiaoshuo.qq.com/detail/1031826280

In English : Douluo first sword.....Author: Liu_Shui_Wu_Qing_FD...... In Chinese: 斗罗第一剑......作者：刘_水_吴_清_FD

but isn't the point of a self-insert fanfic that the world revolves around the mc? even if mc himself thinks that the world revolves around the real protagonist and then the mc and the new plot armor become the best friends in the world

hmm you're more incoherent than the fanfic itself dude

you're crazy man, harem novels and fanfiction are everywhere and you say that there's more no-harem than harem, plus I don't even understand what you find in these harem novels, it's clearly exaggerating and hateful. the proof is that I myself was a reader of the harem genre, and now everything related to that disgusts me

damn I hate this guy with all my heart (the regressor) I don't know why, otherwise thank you for the chapter, superb as always.....Please kind of give him a beating in the next chapter