Bradley_Jacques

good premise, and characters feel in character. but I feel that the grammar holds this story back. I recommend going back through pervious chapters and fixing grammar using an outside source if English is not your first language like grammaly or quillbot.

can you give the mtl link to the novel?

will take this into account, thanks.

I edited the skill to something else due to advice from a writing senior about just how complex conversion is, and to go with something simple

yeah I just push things out slowly to not burn myself out like previous works that I had

wow that was a fast comment, any feedback? looking to improve and maybe rewrite a few parts I'm unsatisfied with

cloud knights, and they are speaking Chinese, this isn't permanent though

good chapter, would like to see sparkle and his's interactions in penaconty

chapter was good, but I don't like Kenshin suddenly becoming a simple for arle the second he saw her soul. although it's unique, it's degrading to see him offer everything to her, just my opinion

I thought the author was a member of the anti harem sect, but it seems I was mistaken by previous chapters. a shame.