I think I’m just gonna leave it here since he chose the actual worst option of those four specifically because of the downsides. The oni quirk he obviously chose(fanfic title made it obvious) is fine but seriously dude. What’s even more annoying about the eyes is the fact that it would just create an mc who would become to reliant on them since they -1- summon shadows -2- give teleportation -3- give telekinesis which isn’t really all that interesting and is a budget sung Jin woo.

I’m gonna be honest the mc seems stupid here because he says this like he can’t just learn about a weapon which would be pretty easy to do even if it’s not a modern weapon. Also anything you can think of means even weapons that technically don’t exist even if they are weaker because you aren’t knowledgeable about them. Even a 15 year old would be smart enough to understand the anything you can think of part and the fact that they can just do some research on a weapon. If he’s going to be this stupid throughout the entire fanfic then it’s just not worth reading.

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Again cosmic being can hear things as space wouldn’t affect it and since it’s obviously near him it would obviously be affecting the area. Now how much of the area I don’t know but he’s obviously close enough to it that those affects somewhat apply. So if he was far enough away then space would act as it did normally and the scream would not be heard.

Do you not realize that’s just what he’s starting with and not all he will have. So your comment itself is just stupid and shows that you don’t even think before you comment on something. You’re complaining like it’s all he will have and his character is based on Karna so it makes sense. If you want to complain about it then why would you even read something where the character is based on Karna an archer.

This is a cosmic being so saying there should be no sound from us moving does not apply here

Giving 1 star over how the author feels about Xavier is just too much especially when the hate is justifiable

Ok well that’s your problem if you’re bored with Karna being Karna

How about you do your research before trying to correct someone

Read the damn tags dude

They probably didn’t since they didn’t really need to I guess

Was it ever said that they couldn’t do so.

I’ll do so whenever I can get back to reading👍

What’s confusing?

Like what going on currently but please work on the grammar.

That’s exactly why I asked, because it’s obvious that he doesn’t and would either not reply or come up with some bs.

Don’t remember him saying he was actually ready just that he was going to do it and even if he’s not ready it’ll happen anyways and he most likely knows this.

I guess people don’t understand that a story is not ruined by something until something actually happens with the thing that they say ruined it. If you have no experience with writing such a thing you should probably shut your mouth and wait.

Cause most people would assume that

I’m just going to be blunt. I could care less about wether or not you dropped it because after my initial comment whatever you do after is none of my business. But immediately saying something is ai over four words is absolutely dumb and makes no sense unless it was an over the top description of something using big words that people usually don’t use. And there is also the fact that some people do write like what you said was ai or they use ai to edit their stuff which can come out wonky.