In my opinion Raven is not only a good friend but also a really smart ally to Hino. She is someone who knows a lot of things and have much knowledge which helps the mc a lot. And the way she gives information to the mc is done so gracefully, without giving a lot of hint. She also has a great chemistry with the male mc, which make her more likeable. I also like the fact that she always do things in a calm and rational matter.

The chapter was great, it was nice to see those inner thoughts inside the mc's mind, it kinda reminds me of myself lol. I think the conflict that the mc is facing right now is really a good character development. The mc also realized that even he's smart and perfect the world is still unfair. It's also a good touch that you used the phrase "all is fair in love and war" as the title, it really fits the current situation. The characters in this series is really well written and i think it's gonna be even better as the story progress.

It was a nice touch that you use the words "obsession" as the title of the chapter it really shows how obsessive he is now and it's a great way to describe his. And her obsession will only give more obstacle for the mc to tackle. Which is good for the mc to test his wits more and overcome all those obstacles. BUT HE FAILED SCIENCE CLASS

i can imagine both of them they are cute aswell!

okay! i smell a ship here!

dude! your wife looks fragile! dude how dare you!

your crossing the line dude! but it make sense

dude! how dare you treat her like that! she look fragile!

Girl, what you both did is just something else, it's light and the vibe is good. i love how you both make love without us seeing it. GODAMIT!

EYYY! HE DESERVE THAT!

This is women empowerment! i like the author empowering woman

I like the rune symbol

DUDE SLEEEEP!!

well i think it's kinda thrilling tho so i liked it.

you deserve that dude!

dude! you're so embarrassing! What if your wife pays your bills and your internet to get sauces?

I read it, in my opinion it's great. I like the main character, he has a smart and ruthless brain also he thinks logically. The world settings is interesting too especially the chess theme it kinda remind me of code geass which i loved too. I just can't wait to read the next chapter. I think it's great and unique. The way the Author makes the mc has a great battle of will, wits and strategy is nice. The action is interesting too and i kinda like the romance subplot, which gives much character development. They have opposites-attract type personalities, as their strengths and weaknesses complement one another. Their shared goal of exposing the secrets of the secret society could also create a strong connection between them. The boat is not sinking THE SHIP IS NOT SINKING i hope so in REAL LIFE DAMN!! I would be curious to see how their opposites-attract dynamic plays out, and how they would work out when conflicts inevitably arise due to their differences. Additionally, I would be interested in seeing how their personal issues and insecurities impact the relationship. The premise of the book sounds very interesting and the synopsis intrigues me. I think it addresses some fundamental questions about the nature of humanity and the universe in a unique way. It seems like the story would be full of suspense and intrigue, with the two main characters going through an interesting and perhaps mind bending journey. I would definitely be inclined to read it.