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RedPandaK5dコメント“Considering there are no other applicants, you will attain the job”
But then, Shade laughed, "I knew you would say the right thing. It's in your blood, after all. Even if you spilled some bullshit, I would still teach you because you're the only hope left. Still, nice words my friend."- RedPandaK5dに返信 Author_han
- RedPandaK5d発表
Tried to give this a chance, however I feel like this story has too much inspiration from Shadow Slave. This doesn’t even feel as if it has its own identity. The MC is my biggest gripe, he is a transmigrator and engineer yet I feel as if a teenager would have better decision making for development and strategy. The MC isn’t fully utilizing his OP ability and states that it is his strategy?? I started to give up on the story when in the mountain cave he didn’t even think to use his clone to level up his talent by sending it down the mountain to fight easy monsters when he was less than 30 talents away from evolving. The timing was also strange considering the MC ‘lost’ himself in war and was fighting constant battles for an undisclosed amount of time. Yet he didn’t level up and only managed to increase his talents by 900?? Even if he only led 20 campaigns after Night Terror, he couldn’t kill more than 45 monsters per war campaign? As a general? Describing his fights as if he was going through them like a hot knife through butter. It just doesn’t make sense. Not only that but his start was also rushed and not fleshed out. He was fully conscious as an infant and did not even consider trying to build himself in any expertise or skill to give himself an edge? Standing behind your dad and being a good analyzer is the absolute freaking bare minimum, bro did not develop his body at all, he did not learn how to wield a weapon because daddy forbade it?? Nah. I love the concept but I feel it’s missing a lot of common sense logic which would make the story a better read. The descriptive words were good too, I think that was very well thought of. Keep writing and improving because you will become a better author.
- RedPandaK1mthコメント
Bro got hit with the Tom Holland spider-man ending
"...Because I'm far away from home." - RedPandaK2mthに返信 DingotookmekidSunny struggled to describe the wrongness he felt, but it was definitely there. Humans, after all, were not meant to perceive the fabric of space — why would they, considering that it was meant to be constant and immutable?
- RedPandaK2mthコメント"That's rude, but I think it's something you'll come to like." Gala smiled. "After all, you'll be more powerful."
- RedPandaK2mthコメント
Fr though, Duke is so goofy to expect someone, who he was going to kill, to be obedient
'You would've killed me anyway, dude.' Arthur shook his head as he gazed at the distance. He looked back and saw the Knight of Courage fighting the duke back. Suddenly, a knight flew over to them and Arthur allowed him entry. - RedPandaK2mthコメント
Yes, yes it does
'Damn it, does praying ever actually work?' Arthur curled his body into a ball as the statue above him was cut into three giant pieces. The statue fell on the hole and closed it completely except for a small gap in it. - RedPandaK2mthコメント'You literally pull carriages.' Arthur was speechless. A commotion was raised behind and as Arthur turned to look, he saw a convoy splitting the crowd in two. It was a familiar scene and the whispers around Arthur confirmed his doubts.
- RedPandaK2mthに返信 DidYouReadMyName
She graped him
"Are you embarrassed now?" She smiled as their lips touched again but Arthur flinched backward. "..." She looked at him silently, clarity returning to her eyes before she pushed him away. "Get out." - RedPandaK2mthコメント
Switch the roles and y’all wouldn’t like this.
"Are you trying to run away?" Larza's dark-brown eyes met his as she asked softly, but he could feel an edge to her voice. It held a threatening tone. Arthur's body stiffened as he let go of the handle. "Good," She smiled as she kissed him again. "Now, give yourself up to me." - RedPandaK2mthコメントCh 273 Don't Buy This Chapter: Error.
- RedPandaK2mthコメントHowever, Arthur appeared above. With an ax kick, Arthur struck the creature in the abdomen making it cough black matter that seeped through its mask.
- RedPandaK2mthに返信 August26
Twas during the trial he helped her. She would’ve probably been disqualified had he not interfered
He tried to help her, but where did that lead her? If he hadn't helped her to get into Jerano, she would have been alive now. - RedPandaK2mthコメント
These jokes are top tier 😂
"We need to leave, Sir Alexie." Norman came, fully geared in armor. Arthur glanced at it and found it to be fully inscribed. He was wearing his armor too, but it lacked in aura compared to Norman's armor. "Hehe, I'm something of a rune apprentice myself," Norman said with pride. - RedPandaK2mthコメント
WITH THIS TREASURE I SUMMON
"Nether creatures, you've chosen the wrong person to target!" Arthur roared as he pulled several runic cards from his robes. "I won't fall in this place, and not at the hands of you lowly beings!" - RedPandaK3mthコメント
GOOD GOOGLY MOOGLY
"It's… it was a Great Tyrant." - RedPandaK3mthコメント
This is a bar
Wasn't he supposed to be the most honest person in two worlds? So why couldn't he even be honest with himself? - RedPandaK4mthコメント
Bro looking at his instructor reminiscing on his past life
In his previous life, Fang Yuan had cultivated to Rank six, and he had created the Blood Wing Demon Sect in the Middle Kingdom. He taught tens of thousands of people, and was reputed as a giant figurehead of the Demonic faction, his fame illustrious.