MilkywayAndromeda

That’s true she was considered for expulsion in this scene it was a 50/50 but I thought she could make the story a bit interesting later on so she was saved

I’ll give it a try

Once again don’t let that get you down learning takes time and I’m sure you’lol be able to write a great story

Children of grey

If you want I could try your cote fic

It will be a modern world.

And it will be a psychological story in a world of hero’s and super powers where the protagonist doesn’t have any special powers or anything he’s just a normal person but he manages to trick people into thinking he does have one, there will be a academy arc and etc

I read most of you original story since you asked me I don’t know how to say this and I don’t want to sound rude but I was having trouble finishing it not because the quality was bad everything wa understandable the English was good most times if I could give you one piece of advice it would be that the thoughts of you protagonist need to be more coherent, your protagonist felt omniscient at points when he obviously isn’t and it made it hard for me to sympathize for him I couldn’t understand him or his thought process a lot of times even when you explained his logic and that made the story difficult for me to enjoy. That said once again I’m not trying to be rude or overly critical but I think if you can improve on that you really can make a good story.

I can’t give spoilers like this that would be wild

Yes I’ve been thinking when I finish Y1 I haven’t ever dropped the L one I just haven’t had a desire to continue it yet especially since I don’t think I can work on both fics