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In general, the story is not bad. But when the author describes small details, it becomes “painful” to read. Boobs that move with the wind. Has 6 days passed since you woke up and took the oath from the Guardians? Albedo, who takes care of the lower Orcs? There is no need to describe small details, the logic of the narrative is lost.

A person translates the works of Russian Authors, passing them off as his own work. The author of the original work complains about this man. I am reading the original work and supporting the author by issuing a complaint about this work. Don't do that, or give me a link to the original work.

Why is it so stupid to show aggression in the barracks ? The hero of this story has a brain the size of a chicken egg. To live for millions of years and not get smarter, you need to have talent. The whole story is funny. Thank you.