Fallen_Pages
The stories written in the fallen pages
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Thank you very much! Nice to see you again! I haven't dropped this yet, but I need to grab more readers, so I have been working on a new novel (to be released) in which each chapter amounts to something, instead of a build-up like this one. Hopefully, it will attract more people to this work so I can continue it in the future.
I know what the problem is. In the mobile version, there is no space at all. I only use a PC, so I didn't know. I'll use that dash for this page.
Hi! The space between paragraphs indicates that!
Didn't Buddha, Hercules, Guan Yu, and many others die before becoming gods?... That was a bit of my history nerdiness speaking hahaha. In respect to my novel, if he actually is going to lose his immortality or not, or about the afterlife and the world of the gods... Those are things I'm not going to spoil right now ; )
Hey Misifus! Thank you so much for your comments in every chapter and your power stones; it really helps! I'm supposedly going to be recommended in "Potential Starlet" tomorrow; maybe you will get a companion in the comment section in the future. I know it is too much to ask, but one can dream, haha.
The MC's growth was pretty smooth because of the tower and the pillow, but it's not the same for every character or (normally) every year. There are a lot of factors that come into play. But I won't enter in details yet, because there is already too much info in a very short time. Cheers!
For example, with this one, Igor started the paragraph three consecutive times, and also, he "dreaded" something just two sentences apart (or one if we don't count the ",") A little lower there are also three consecutive paragraphs starting with Mr. But these are just minor things, author, the novel is easily readable. Keep up the good work.
Because he was expecting it? I think haha. If it really was the afterlife or something like that there could be someone like St. Peter or Enma.
Though the not-so-handsome ones are interesting as well, especially when that is part of the plot.
Thank you! She is!
Ah, but I think from chapter 13 onwards they got a little less big. (I hope)