DaoistWsow5U

It is a fine fanfiction or novel however, there is barely an introduction in the first book he gets was way too strong already. I will continue, but it’s already slightly lower rated on my reading list.. I do not want to hate on the author. It’s actually the opposite. I hope that you can continue to improve your writing. I look forward to it.

Good story but still falls into the WebNovel pitfall of waaaaaaaaaay to much side story and ignoring the mc for several chapters at a time

It just had to be harem…. Was so promising until the harem was mentioned in chapter 6. Get a life

Waaay too many pov changes where nothing new happens. We get 5 different pov for the same scene ..

Sooooo many chapter but it’s literally a few chapters that are waaaaaaay to spread out. Sometimes we get like 10 chapters where nothing happen or it’s still the same situation as 10 chapters before. It’s ok to read but really not needed.

Tftc but way to much filler

Tyftc

Overall a great story. Only issue is that some chapters are basically one paragraph long and a lot of the chapters seems way to stretched out. Many chapters can be fused into one no need for part 1-10080022830 just for one chapter on how they sat down to talk. Other than that keep up the great work!

I think so yes

I like it but it feels so familiar to a story on ff . Are you posting it on here? Please let me know