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What a shame. But let's see how the story unfolds until then.

I was here looking for an interesting story to read, and I ended up finding this story, which at first glance seemed like more of the same, but when I decided to read this story... Man, what a pleasant surprise. The story itself is simple, with Coby joining the Straw Hats to make his dreams come true, but the author does it in a very well-done and fun way that makes you want to read more and more. And as for the Skill Weaver System, it is quite OP, but the skills are not given away, but with Coby I try to fight and pay a price for the skills, which makes everything much more balanced. And on top of all that, the Author clearly loves the story he's doing and is a complete One Piece FANATIC, something really cool to see, as he's really dedicated to creating a good story for his readers. And with all that said, this story is not only very good, it has the potential to become one of the BEST ONE PIECE STORIES ON THE WEBNOVEL, and according to some of the comments I saw from the Author, this story is going to get BETTER AND BETTER. And I'm really looking forward to seeing how this story unfolds, the changes to the canon and how strong Coby will still be. Excellent work, Author (Google Translation)

Cool. Just please, don't abandon this story, and if possible, write the Spider-Man and Doom stories

Great chapter I loved the development of the world you did in this chapter, showing the Kages' point of view, their strategies and Garp's influence in the war. So ignore these people who are complaining about frequency, which is also great 👍 (Google Translation)

Great chapter!!! And so Garp and his grandchildren pay a visit to Konoha and who knows, maybe some things will change... But tell me author, are you going to make Garp ally with the Rain Village after this, or is he just going to be wandering around the Elemental Nations?? (Google Translation)

Very interesting story with a lot of potential!!! From what I've seen in the chapters (currently 5), this story won't really delve into the shinobi world, but rather be a lighter read, but of course this could change over time as the chapters progress. And of course, Garp is easily the best thing about this story. The author managed to capture his essence very well, and it's really cool to see a relaxed grandpa in the middle of a war, but still being a serious and experienced man who puts his precious people first. This story is very good so far, but don't read it expecting GREAT THINGS, but rather to have fun and see Garp kicking the ass of a bunch of mannerless ninjas and you'll have a very enjoyable read (Google translator)

Very interesting story. At first I admit that I didn't really like the beginning, showing all the wars with Logan involved in them, but as it progressed, it became more and more interesting and engaging to read, also showing that this whole story was not in vain and that he left its mark on the world (and on certain people too). And now that we're in the present, I'm liking the way you're developing your story and I'm looking forward to seeing how things continue from now on (and I particularly want to see Logan face off against Homelander, Stormfront and Soldier Boy). And on the technical side, the story has a slow pace, but also without TOO much nonsense, and the writing is very good and pleasant to read. The only bad thing is the update frequency, which is a little slow, but in the end we are always compensated by a great chapter. Overall, one of the best The Boys stories to read on Webnovel. You are doing a great job Author 👍 (Google Translation)

Serious ?! Wow, I'm very glad now 😁

Yes. Because besides Naruto having someone to trust with all things about his system, if there is a team function, Naruto will be able to share his item and status gains to them, which would be really cool to see happening 👍 (Google Translation)

I have some ideas for magical items that can be used in the story and that could be useful for Naruto: Teleport Item: Allows the bearer to teleport to any place they have been to before (I know there's Hiraishin, but a teleportation item, that doesn't use Chakra, right from the beginning is EXTREMELY useful, both in combat and in locomotion) Invisibility Item: While being worn, the wearer cannot be seen or felt by anyone (Very useful for ANBU, powder cannot be seen and will not be felt by sensors. Furthermore, it is very useful for pranks 😂👍) Environment Manipulation Item: Allows the wearer to manipulate the element present in the environment (The name and description are not very accurate, but let me explain: It's basically the Avatar Bending, if Naruto is in a place with water he can use the item to manipulate it at will, he can also use it to manipulate the earth from the ground, the air to levitate and so on. So I believe it is an extremely versatile item and very useful for ANBU and other things) Object Change Item: Allows the bearer to change the shape of inanimate objects to whatever they desire (Basically Harry Potter's Transfiguration, but it can be very useful for combat and complex things as well as for simpler and more banal things) Chakra Attunement Item: Allows the bearer to tune in to their highest affinity Elemental Chakra, allowing absolute control over it (This item will allow Naruto to have absurd control over his Wind Chakra, being able to strengthen wind jutsus, shape the wind chakra as he wishes and even transform his body into wind, being able to create an intangibility equal to Logia de One Piece. An idea that I found very interesting, especially now that Hinata gave Naruto a wind jutsu scroll) And that is all ! I think these items will be good to be included in the story and I believe that other weapons will not be very interesting as Naruto already has his Sen No Tenrui. Furthermore, all of the above are open to change, whether in name or usage, do what you think is best for the story 👍 (Google Translation)