BlueJeans
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BlueJeans2mthコメントTruck-kun always making trouble
The truck had hit Manav, who was running on the road.- BlueJeans2mthコメントCh 1 Chapter 1: The Call Of The Forest
- BlueJeans2mthコメントCh -2 About The Author Pt. 2
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I feel the same here.
Maybe. But it's a chore for me to read straight romance between lovers as well as it is to write it. And I'm also inexperienced when it comes to that type of love. Truthfully, platonic friendships are much more fulfilling to me where I am in life right now. I've never had a lover before, so I can't say I know what I'm missing, but perhaps that's why I don't crave for it. And if a love like that isn't something I desire, I won't write poems about it. - BlueJeans2mthコメントCh 1 Chapter 1: The Fall of the Wall
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This is interesting
There, all countries became one, which was named the World Government. Their plan was to defend against the dinosaurs, and try to find out why did this happen. The thing they were most curious about was: For many years NASA was in space, how were they not able to find out that Earth was actually larger? - BlueJeans2mthコメント
what kind of beast would appear?
A large part of Antarctica suddenly collapsed, causing world-wide flooding. And to add to destruction, the extinct beasts from the ancient times reappeared, along with other unknown creatures. - BlueJeans2mth発表
The novel is good but it need more improvement on its writing. Detailed description is good. But it could distract reader attention on more crucial scenes. In some of the chapter, I easily distracted because how detailed the description of some scenes. It makes me forget what's going on. I'm not quite to sure with the timeline. It makes me wonder if some scenes were fake and some scenes were actual reality.There's no problem with the story. But for me the reading experience is needed to improve. Like avoiding to used detailed description on every scenes and focused on scenes that needed to be describe with more detail.Overall I'll still recommend reader to give this a try.
- BlueJeans2mthコメントCh 5 Coffee
- BlueJeans2mthコメントCh 3 Grandma
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This thing is making me confused. Just what happened. I can't even tell which is reality and which is not.
In that moment, Miro felt a strange sensation. His surroundings blurred, and when he opened his eyes, he found himself back at his desk, lost in thought. The remnants of the glow lingered on his hand, leaving him contemplating the mysterious connection with the old lady. - BlueJeans2mthコメント
Is this a time skip perhaps?
"Understood, Director. What's the extraction plan for Miles?" Miro had been in the industry long enough not to let his emotions cloud his mission. - BlueJeans2mthコメント
I think description like this could ve been simplyfied.
The sleek shuttle, nestled in a concealed spot beneath the library, emanated an air of covert sophistication. Its exterior, a seamless blend of matte black and midnight blue, was designed to merge with the underground world's shadows seamlessly. The surface, made of cutting-edge composite materials, hinted at the advanced technology concealed within. Tinted windows, revealing nothing of the clandestine activities within, added an extra layer of secrecy to its appearance. The absence of any discernible markings or logos ensured that its origins remained discreet. - BlueJeans2mthコメントCh 1 System
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You should at least try to run. Don't wait the truck and hug it.
"Damn it," he muttered under his breath, bracing himself for impact. - BlueJeans2mthコメント
Does the Helicopter just crushed on them?
"I've got you, Miles," Miro's voice was filled with warmth and love as he looked at Miles, who was like a Father to him. But in an instant, the safety of their moment shattered. The steady hum of the helicopter turned into a chaotic screech, blurring everything outside the window into a whirlwind of colors. - BlueJeans2mthコメント
I really like this type of game. I played many like Civ series, Rise of Nations and more.
"Kingdoms vs. Empire" starts players off as mere villagers, tasking them with evolving their settlements through various stages: from village to town, then city, and ultimately, to a kingdom. To ascend to the status of an empire, a player must conquer at least three kingdoms, compelling the defeated to pledge allegiance under their empire's flag. This hierarchical structure positioned empires as formidable forces, commanding resources and loyalty from the subjugated kingdoms. - BlueJeans2mthに返信 _HavenCh 3 002: Fives Experimental Rabbit