Moonlight_63

For some reason, I'm beginning to not like Zuri as much or even feel pity for her. Would her loyalties switch to the next man who showed her affection?

So, will Khaos use Zuri to spy on Xaden? I'm sure she would do it willingly. Such despicable people, this story is a bit crazy

Something is really cracked in Zuri. Maybe too much abuse has driven her off the deep end

omg, how come the early half of the book looks to have a proof reader, but this half clearly shows broken English and incorrect pronoun usage. Is there a different writer or no one's editing the story anymore?

This is my 2nd time reading parts of the story. Not sure if the author got tired later on or, had a proofreader and stopped using them but, the editing went out the window and you can clearly see the difference in the earlier story.

Braver than Cane? He wants to see her step out of her comfort zone. Had he intervened, do you think Iris would have been able to talk back to Redmond as she did?

Iris is a Luna amongst people who are still ambivalent towards her due to her father and brother. Now or never, she has to step out of her comfort zone.

From the summary, it looks like the book needed to be proofread for grammatical errors. Too distracting.

So, we don't know how to knock?

Agree, which is why it's important to write out a rough draft or, get a beta reader who picks up on things like that.