Daoist7Lifes

>> Read this till 280 chapter. I was really looking forward to this novel. The idea of MC being famous coz of Alchemist profession was great but till Chapter 280 there is not an ounce of alchemy involved (it might be there in later chapters but it would have been better if MC mentioned it in earlier chapters on his plans and all)World building is nice. >> Character development is okay.>> Character growth and connections with others is kinda lame. >> Starting was good and I was really looking forward to it. Later, the story keeps me thinking as if written by some 16 yr old kid.>> @Author Don't get me wrong. I've nothing against you and I would love to see this novel grow more beautifully.I would love to help if you are looking for somebody to proofread.>> I would really like it if we could connect (to bounce some ideas) Pls reply back if u r okay with it and I will send my email.