Snakes_Eye

Nice but not regular in updates. It have a lot of potential if use correctly and grammar is good according to this app/website......................

one of the best novels out there the starting have few plot holes but gradually the writing quality increased and every plot hole becomes some sort of spoilers...

honestly dont know from where do i start, the is a bit rough but i thought the quality will increase and there will be no more stupidity (plot holes) but i was wrong... Seriously a goat... a goat for a second mother figure... and how the h*ll did he even become a shepherd if his family is of noble lineage... poverty but i dont think so could have shown anything else but really an army of goats... mc even cant fight without his goat mother and honestly the character feels 2-D no 1-D and even forced except for the mc but he is very cliched and mama this mama that (goat).... it is very annoying... His power is good but he doesnt use it to its full capacity... he was said to be a gamer but he do disappointing things and his character development is trash the story tells that he was mischievous but dont tell us how even if it is slow paced or gave him ptsd but it looked forced...

100 x 5000 = 500000 (Five Hundred Thousand) dollars for the people who cant do simple maths

cringe... please dont give it young master vibes

why..? doesnt he live in a mansion so it must have 40-50 restrooms

one of the best fan fic on this platform... this ff has a real plot and best background... the story development is also best and ending is just... out of this world, it just connects everything... tell me author how much 'time' did u take to plan all this

eeeeewwwwww..... so cringeeeee