SuperiorNZ

Strength to Victory

First of all, I’ll admit I’m not entirely sure how to reply to your comment but thank you so much for taking the time to read the chapter and share your thoughts! Your feedback honestly made me pause and reflect on the entire chapter. Looking back, I realize there are parts I didn’t handle as carefully as I should have. I truly appreciate the time and effort you put into analyzing the story. It means a lot to hear that the characters’ personalities and the overall tone felt true to canon staying authentic is something I really strive for in my writing. I completely understand your point about the speeches and dialogues! I can see how they might feel overwhelming, especially when there’s a lot of talking in quick succession. Moving forward, I’ll work on balancing things out better by adding more breaks for reflection, action, and emotional depth to keep the flow more engaging. Thank you again for pointing that out it’s feedback like this that helps me improve! There’s a chance I may have misunderstood your comment, but I’ll take this as an opportunity to reflect on my writing and improve.

i have already planned for that just wait for it and it will be Superior,

He didn't, and Batman is not the only billionaire anyway and if you read the part carefully that doesn't mean that batman identity is in star labs so spiderman doesn't know batman identity

the Former.

where did the other part of that come from i only know some of them but not all of it

he is from marvel

nope

I appreciate your enthusiasm for the Slam Dunk series, but it’s just not something I could connect with personally. I found the story and themes a bit outside my preferences, and I had difficulty engaging with it. I respect its legacy and why it resonates with so many fans, but it’s just not my cup of tea. I hope that’s okay, and thank you for understanding

especially the web fluid