Dragon_emperer

story pace is perfectly fine.just certain story line needs slow paced approach. u r doing great in that aspect. keep going boss donzo[img=strong]

at the beginning it was nice, once the novel starting to progress, it just feels like reading copy paste version of hunter academy which in itself is irritatingly slow-paced novel. so this one is not my cup of tea. good luck though.

at the begining i hesitated to read this novel because of the synopsis, but once i gave it a try its fantastic. this one is a gem. author maybe like me others to have misthought due to synopsis so a just a suggesting why not try adding more details in synopsis.

isn't liu second year?

take care of yourself author

just usual templated novel story where hero gets summoned to another world as hero and does his things, which sloth has written in his own style. nothing new.

yes agreeable if its some random person, but the MC is one of the person she hates the most and she ironically forgets the face of the same person she hates.

author recently there seems to be a lot of wrong wordings,if it's only me noticing it? just letting you know.

"ren" not luna i guess

its really hard to digest that a mature man in the body of a young man behaving like a spoiled brat. if there was no reincarnation then it would have somewhat clicked. hope u tone his mischievous character down a bit in the upcoming chapters.