Anmortis

To be honest, the inclusion of all these otherworldly people in the story leaves a bitter taste in my mouth, and I read these three chapters to the end just so that it wouldn't be left unfinished. You have created a strong character and therefore there will be no events that will cause her to struggle in the future. Therefore, you need to write some story lines that will challenge the character and you have included characters from another world in this world. And this chapter brings up another mystery. Honestly, I came here to read 'Yuri Harry Potter fanfiction'. These otherworldly 'Sexy deadly sins' didn't interest me at all. On the contrary, I was disappointed. I will continue reading until the current update. I hope these deadly sins get the hell out of the story as soon as possible. I don't want to discourage anyone but this addition you made seemed unnecessary to me. Her first love interest is an OC character. There is a harem tag and considering the deadly sin sisters involved in the story, I'm worried that her other love interest will be an OC too.

Wow...

Ahh I see. So you're saying it would have been good if it was like this. I mean it could have been interesting but with Rakshasa's actions it doesn't seem possible. First she interfered with Tang Chen's exam. Then if we accept the information written in this fanfic as true, she stole Bibi Dong as well. Other than that, for those who don't know, the Sea God is interfering with the Angel God Exam. Heis getting help from the God of Emotions at that time and intervening in the Test. That's why Qian Renxue's changing emotions. Also, if I'm not mistaken, the Sea God and the Angel God became Gods at the same time, but they had a falling out over something before they became Gods. So yes, the two have a history.

Rakshasa Scythe and Armor? Probably an error by the original author.

lovers?

Soo... an Elder will come with us?

Who knows how many hundred-year-old your father doesn't know what to say, but do you know at 7 years old? It may be a little late to say this, but I hope this inconsistency will be corrected in the next episodes. I mean, I'm not saying that Dia's father is the smartest character, but I think we should not forget his age and the experience that this age brings. Of course, if he wanted Dia to explain herself, I wouldn't say anything, but that's obviously not the case.

I just came back to the story after taking a break for a while and forgot the details of the past chapters. I thought the events Schlacht mentioned in this chapter were events that will happen in the future. I hope you can state when the Omake chapters take place chronologically in the future so that there are no misunderstandings like this.

I know that these events will not happen exactly that way, but I can make a guess about how they actually happened. And that's what makes me less excited to read. I can only hope that the events Schlaht describes in the will change. What's the fun in reading about something you know will happen? I understand adding different character POVs but I really don't understand giving spoilers from the future.