Anmortis

The story is getting ridiculous. The teams and their members are set. How can it be changed so easily? Let's say it can be changed: What's the need? I mean, do you have to get involved in every little incident involving Tang San? Okay, you're enemies with him, but why bother with such little incidents? The reputation of the Academy? You can save your reputation by winning the tournament. It's obvious that it was written to glorify the MC. I think this lowers the quality of the story. Still, it's better than many Chinese novels. I've come across much worse ones. Thanks for the translation.

It could have been a great story, until the MC's plot armor is revealed. At this point it's very easy to guess what will happen in the future. Who will die and who will live. That's the problem with Chinese novels. You can guess the end of the story before it ends. It's hard to find a really good Chinese novel. Thanks for the translation.

Yeey! Strong Hinata!(?)

Mai or Maki? Which one you mean?

I just noticed that I forgot some parts. Did the Uchiha massacre happen the same way? Or were there some changes?

Count of Serenno by y1fellas from Fanfiction. net(37 chapter). original author of this story. I just wanted to write this in case anyone is wondering. Although this comment will probably be deleted. As before.

I think your writing quality is good and it's generally fun to read. However, the content of the chapters and the events in the later chapters don't seem to suit my taste. I can understand her losing to the Root member. But, it seems illogical to me to share that you are a reborn person with someone else, no matter how much you trust them. Other than that, I'm bored of reading recipes. I mean, slice-of-life sections are generally fun to read. We get to know the world you created better and her relationships with other characters develop. But when I get into Naruto fan fiction, what I want to read is not food and music. It feels like an filler episode rather than a slice of life episode. It's not easy to write a fan fiction with more than one reincarnation. I've read a Naruto fan fiction with many more reincarnations before and it's good. If it's done well, it could be a very high-quality book. But I've decided to take a break from this book for now. I was disappointed by a few decisions made by the main character. I hope you continue writing this book until the end. I wonder if you read this entire comment. Anyways, TFTC.

I was so cringe that I couldn't read the fight scene at the end. It was obvious from the title, but didn't she study taijutsu with her father? Also, she's becoming more and more dependent on Sora every day, and it's not fun to read about it. I mean, she should be friends with him, but only with him? Wasn't she in her 17s in her previous life? Why is she still acting like she's 6?

Hey, Danzo! I found a talented kid. He might be useful for ROOT.