An author of a light novel called “Master of The Great Ball”.
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If you are asking wether the spell is coming from an Indian movie or not, then yes you are right
Not Indian 😂 but everyone watches Indian movies now right! Personally it’s my favourite.
It is kinda interesting actually how that author introduced the two main character in the first two chapters , having a wonderful interaction for a first meeting. You should continue writing, this can be a good novel
This is one of my favorite books, the author really did a great job when he wrote it, I just hope I close my eyes then open them and find it became completed so that I read it to the end , I am eager to know more about his previous lives, the future events in the novel, really excited and really can’t wait for it. . . . . . Can anyone read my novel and give me his opinion!!
Oh woow , that’s good , author you nailed it , a great start by the way , absolutely loved it , and I'm excited to know how it will continue
Great start
I think you care a lot about this novel , that’s good , good book, keep up the great work, good luck with your work. loved it, ....Best Wishes
Woow , that was strong and tense beginning, really liked it when she hit him in the face , really convenient. This was good, I don’t have anything to add except for wishing you good luck
Yeah it was nice , you know I was always seeking for a novel where MC looses everything at the beginning and then left alone in the world with a hard past and no weaknesses.
Interesting , I loved the way she reacted over her transmigration. I always find novel where mc accepts it like nothing very unlogic. You did a great work building your main character, hopefully your novel is going to be a big hit, don’t forget us when that happens “ ha ha ha “ just kidding with you. Keep it up , don’t stop , your novel is great.