NKGreyInk
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An author working on getting their work more attention.
2023-04-10 入りましたGlobal
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NKGreyInka year ago発表Very well developed idea, with pretty believable dialogue, the only issue is on some of the tenses, but other than that it's a fabulous piece of developing fiction.
- NKGreyInka year agoコメント
Nice use of imagery throughout so far, your work is very well rounded.