Kevin_Harper_1476

Lv11

2023-04-04 入りましたGlobal

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ライティング

83.5h

読書の

295

本を読む

バッジ

瞬間

245

Kevin_Harper_147611 days ago
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Run on sentances rampant. You need to out more periods and break up these large chunks of text.
This has been going on with constant failed attempts to kill Tyler,Dalin Taleeb was getting more frustrated for his family's reputation was being jeopardize because of his ungrateful son as he always called Tyler and ungrateful son for not appreciating the life of a scholar given to him by Dalin so he decided to assassinate him when he returns from the Republic of Venice he planned to throw a banquet announcing his return and that's when he shall strike and finish Tyler once and for all ending the disgrace of his family.
RISE OF THE BLOOD NECROMANCER..
ファンタジー · Ghost_realm
Kevin_Harper_147611 days ago
に返信 Jaeven
Crazy
They were Nephis and Sunny — two incarnations of him, to be precise.
Shadow Slave
ファンタジー · Guiltythree
Kevin_Harper_147620 days ago
に返信 RegalObscure
Indeed
Knowing that the police had yet to arrive at the scene of this attack, and were likely moments away, Karl felt compelled to act before this young girl could be killed, or worse.
Re: Blood and Iron
軍事 · Zentmeister
Kevin_Harper_147620 days ago
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No fear when writing. I respect you authour
In years past, such an event would be almost unthinkable, but due to Germany's lax migration laws, hundreds of thousands, if not millions of military age migrants had flooded the country, and Europe in general mostly coming from war-torn nations.
Re: Blood and Iron
軍事 · Zentmeister
Kevin_Harper_14762 months ago
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Looking forward to reading it.
Ch -1 Author's Note
Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World
ゲーム · _Drakon
Kevin_Harper_14762 months ago
に返信 Biako
It wouldn’t be, there’s no reason to cap it logically. Make it harder to learn spells.
[You have used one of your spell slots. Remaining Spell Slots: 2]
Deus Necros
ゲーム · Biako
Kevin_Harper_14762 months ago
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Why would you have spell slots in this world? Your learning magic, there’s no reason for a cap, this is just a way for you to make Swordsmanship useful…
[You have used one of your spell slots. Remaining Spell Slots: 2]
Deus Necros
ゲーム · Biako
Kevin_Harper_14763 months ago
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Pah! Who needs a sword when you can have a death knight or two to do all that for you. In the words of Tyron Steelarm, a Jack of all trades is a master of none.
In the courtyard below, something unexpected caught his eye. Hundreds of students filled the open training area, but instead of performing magical incantations or working with arcane artifacts, they were wielding swords. They stood in rows, their blades glinting in the setting sun as they followed the commands of an instructor. Each swing of their swords was executed with precision, the sound of metal cutting through the air in unison.
Deus Necros
ゲーム · Biako
Kevin_Harper_14763 months ago
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It’s not like time is exactly pressing right now.
First, there was Necro's Eternal Quest, with its primary objective: to outgrow Bastos Van Dijk's control. It felt like the beginning of a long, impossible journey—an overarching mission that could span years, if not decades. It was like one of those sprawling main quests in the MMORPGs Ludwig used to play, where each step led to more challenges, more mysteries, and more danger.
Deus Necros
ゲーム · Biako
Kevin_Harper_14763 months ago
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What a nice lass
"I've already memorized everything," she said, walking away. "You'll need it more than I do."
Deus Necros
ゲーム · Biako

Shadow Of Valor

The third son of a noble, Oliver, embarks on a journey to become a mage. After learning of a terrible, terrible fate, Oliver Hawthorne does everything he can to prevent a devastating future by helping the gods. Even if this means forsaking ordinary powers and turning to the dark arts. How will Oliver overcome the challenges that he will face. Will he be lost to the dark nature of his powers, or overcome them and become an ultimate force of good for humanity and the other humanoid races? Hello all! This is my second attempt at a novel. The first one I did wasn’t up to my standard. I hope for this one to be more focused on character and less about op power. As of right now, not many plans for a romance, and no harem whatsoever. Any corrections or feedback is welcomed. Thanks!

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3 Chs

The Unquiet Dead

A boy bound to a forgotten god who torments his dreams is hunted by those around him after tragedy strikes in his home town. with nothing but fear and the outer gods visions pushing him, the boy must navigate through this cruel and unforgiving world

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4 Chs