Ok so first of all, this is good for an start and is an Fan Fic, so it's crazy good and sounds very intreresting and has potential.(pssssss....the character named Akira is based off me)

I review myself why? well because why not I know what i can do and can't and i will become good!

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Okay this was Awesome. i read your old novel Era of Nirvana i knew this one was even better. KEEP GOINT SEIN! -Your friend Alex